diff --git a/radar/2017-10-01/hal-hateoas.md b/radar/2017-10-01/hal-hateoas.md
index 5678d40..b828180 100644
--- a/radar/2017-10-01/hal-hateoas.md
+++ b/radar/2017-10-01/hal-hateoas.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ quadrant:   methods-and-patterns
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 We still recommend the usage of HAL and HATEOAS.
  
-But depending on the resource structure, there are some pitfalls to be aware of:
+But, depending on the resource structure, there are some pitfalls to be aware of:
 - Increased amount of HTTP calls
-- Parallelization of client side calls is more difficult or even impossible when following links on heavily nested resource structures
-- Consumer side code might get larger  
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+- Parallelization of client-side calls is more difficult or even impossible when following links on heavily nested resource structures
+- Consumer side code might get larger